Paper 2 Introduction

The paper two introduction should answer two questions.

1. What are you observing?
2. Why do you want to observe it?

You can include the thesis statement either at the end of the introduction or the beginning of the body.

Example:
I observed the clientele at Hong Kong Disneyland during the weekend of October 24. I was interested in Hong Kong Disneyland because its visitors come from a wide variety of places. There are Southeast Asians, Mainland Chinese, Hong Kongese, Taiwanese, Australian, etc. I'm interested in how the park is able to entertain this many different types of people, and I'm interested in how people behave in large groups at a family theme park, especially when the people are from varied backgrounds.
Thesis statement example: Hong Kong Disneyland is able to entertain a wide variety of clients because it is well organized and because it concentrates on extralinguistic forms of entertainment: all of the park visitors can enjoy the attractions in the same way no matter what language they speak.